Hahahaha, i've been watching this daily since the first time i watched it.
Amazing work, man. You have alot of talent.
You'v got some real talent, man. Keep it up!
The chase scene went on for abit long, i didnt know if it was just repeating itself or whether it was ever gonna end. But it was drawn well, just mix the animation up abit next time, add some different scenes or even just change the camera angle.
I thought it was pretty funny and well voiced, but there wasnt much animation in it. Still a good watch though!
I loved the whole atmosphere of the animation, the only thing you could have improved slightly is the animation, it couldve been smoother but it wasnt too noticeable. Keep it up!
P.S: Loved the drawings at the end of the movie, you have a good style.
The negative characters
I drew those, the negative version is not the original, i have more art on my website if you wanna check it out.
Nice song but the animation could have been better
It was a touching story and pretty well made, good work, keep it up!
I really love the way you do those fight scenes, its amazing, the way so many people wish they could create scenes like! i bet the numbers are enormous, lol.
The only critisism i have really is the sound, i wouldve liked to see some sound effects in there, it would have really made it complete, the song was good for the nice parts but for the action it didnt suit it so well..
Dont get me wrong, it worked fine! but im just saying a couple of adjustments could've made it a bit better :D
Amazing work though!
It was good for your first, you could try and make your own characters and backgrounds though.
I dont know if you chose to use pixelated characters because you wanted to or because you couldnt be bothered to animate your own drawings.
It was kinda fun though, i got what i expected, PIXEL MADNESSSSSSSSSSSSS, and there was lots of that :D hehe
actual i put together my own bgs like on "the spriters resource" i took sprites of pipes clouds etc. and sorta made my own bgs or at least put together. and also i used pixels because i like the retro feel of pixels.
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