Wajaholic's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Catch A Crab 2]

Nice!

I really liked the style of it, quite unique and fresh, and the sound was nice too.. well everything was good really! lol. I hope to see more games like this from you in the future, these are the kind of games that everyone likes to play, hehe.

[shoot the sheep]

Pretty Good..

I like it, the only things i would really change would be the graphics, it looks like a really old game like on the NES or something, lol. But it has potential, just improve the graphics and it will be alot better.

[Chainsaw the Children]

Har Har

This is a fun game, i never thought i'd see a game like this one, hehe. The only problem is that it gets repetetive after a while, maybe more attacks and things would give it a bigger replay value.

[Toxic Turtle Mayhem]

Turtle Power

Thats pretty good, pretty original, i dont think i've ever played a game like this before.. well.. maybe similiar ones but ya know..

Constructive Critisism:

I dont know if you meant for this but shouldnt the toxic gas flow with the water instead of staying where it lands? Like.. it should go off screen once its landed shouldnt it..?

Shouldnt the turtle in game look at least a little bit like the cartoony one on the Title Page? Compared to the shark it looks too real IMO.

But.. overall its a good game! ...btw.. who is the music by?.. i like it...

[save the gnomes]

It wasnt bad..

I liked the music but there are a few problems in your gameplay such as:

1. Jumping - If you dont reach the maximum jump length you can do double/triple/quadruple jumps until you reach its maximum.

2. Platforms - The main problem is the moving platform, you need to make it so he moves with it or you end up staying where you are then falling, move the platform using Actionscript so then you can make the guy go with it using "this._x += platformspeed" when the guy is touching the platform, or something along those lines.

Also.. what was going on with that platform in level 3?

3. Levels - They got quite boring after a while, and were pretty easy, you could have put more enemies in or made the guy not jump as high so you could put more platforms in which would make it more challenging rather than just 2 platforms and then the end.

It wasnt too bad though, take your criticism into account for your next game and improve on the weak points of this game.

hardcore-eskimo responds:

thanks, i reakky like the fact that you gave me constructive critisism
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